Night


http://www.flickr.com/photos/dennisbarnes/501603747/in/photostream/Earlier this year, The Federation of Student Islamic Societies (FOSIS) launched the “Write a Revolution” competition as part of their SOS Syria project. The competition attracted submissions from writers across the globe. Entrants were asked to consider the words freedom, oppression, unity, justice and hope to write a short story or a poem in light of recent events in Syria. Below is the winning entry for the short story competition.

By Amal Saffour

Once upon a time, night had been his friend.

Underneath her cloak he would sit and watch the city. If the city slept, night was his comrade and his companion. She was his armchair for reflection, his schoolbook, inspiring him with lines of poetry and undiscovered treasures of imagination.

And if the city was alive, if she danced to the tunes of a wedding, burst with the beeps and bustle of traffic, winked at him with her lights; she opened for him the doors of discovery, curiosity, and adventure. His heart raced with the music, his feet itched with delight and longing. The shop lights would beckon at him as he pictured chicken on rotating skewers, the knife coming down on them gently. The quick wrap of bread by nimble fingers. Saha (good health) move on. What’s your order?

Often he would sit on the roadside with his friends, wraps shared between them, meat and yogurt sauce lingering between their teeth. Pass me your unwanted pickles, fat Hassan would laugh. But most of us liked our pickles anyway. The stones are gathered. Who can flick the farthest? Giggles and banter replaced by concentration. Sharp, successive flicks – the sounds of “chinks” recoiling against the wall. Hassan as usual not getting very far. We gather to survey the results, negotiate stones, and take our positions once again. Pause, as a family decides to walk past.

This was the night. It was life and bustle, peace and discovery, friendship and comfort. And that night was no more.

She had disappeared into history books, stacked away in an unknown classroom. She was a dream no longer sought. Her memories were numb. His eyes did not search for her. His arms did not seek her embrace.

He stood outside in the darkness. A sharp wind tugged against the tents. Stones scuffled beneath his soles, welcoming him with a familiar pierce. The hot air dried the sweat of a nightmare off his face. Around him and behind him, he heard soft sobs, muffled cries, heavy breathing, and an overwhelming silence. The silence of uncertainty, of fear.

The vast sky could have meant endless horizons… but it didn’t. Its twinkling stars may one day have spoken to him, but tonight they did not seem to know him. Its sea of blue could have been the ink of his imagination—his poetry. But all he saw was blackness and rejection.

Not peace, but turbulence in his heart. Its rapid beatings brought back the flashbacks of his nightmare, of things his young eyes should not have seen. “Hassan, is that you?” Hand sticking out of rubble, as if waving… but ever so still. Like when they performed a play at school and that Mahmoud, ever so brilliant at acting, kept the audience on their toes and brought tears to the mother’s eyes as he lay dead in pretence. But this time? This was real death. Not an actor on the floor in a school hall who would get up and laugh at the end of it, but someone who would remain still…forever. Hassan was forever still.

Another jolt, another memory. A terrible sound – like a thousand trays had crashed to the floor. And flashes of light that made them run to their mother. Feelings he did not know, could not describe, were pulling and grabbing at his throat. Why was he shaking, shivering, his flesh jumping, crying ecstatically? O mama, what are these sounds? O Mama, save me!

This now was the night. Not friendly beckoning lights, but images of fire raging angrily in his face. No sound of music or life, but memories of explosions – of screams from hell. Night was his sister’s hollow eyes. Night had destroyed his home, stolen his brother. Night was Hassan’s white face, sometimes asking for pickles, bursting into a smile, and then forever remaining still.

Night fought with his head: tumbling images, tightly wrapped emotions, till exhausted, he sunk to his knees.  I don’t know.

I don’t know.

What would Mr. Ahmed say? I can’t even write poetry anymore. Hassan… why is your face so white? Why did you wave at me if you weren’t going to come back? Why didn’t you hide yourself underneath all that rubble? Night… why did you betray me?

And like he did in every night… he released. To horrors indescribable. To miseries far reaching. A sticky wetness spread into his trousers, wetting himself, as he pulled himself together and sobbed his shame into the night.

And night, powerless, wishing she could reach out and bring back their days of happiness… cried out in anguish and sorrow at what humanity had made of her.

But humanity, dumb and blind, never heard her.

 

Amal Saffour studied English Language and Literature at Kings College London and thereafter did her PGCE at the Institute of Education. A qualified teacher, she recently left teaching to work in a Syrian Human Rights organisation, as well as the charitable sector. As someone who loves and values the power of words, she blogs her poetry and reflections at www.homeboundblogger.wordpress.com, with plans to develop it further. Amal was also Vice President of FOSIS between 2010-12 and has been active in community and youth work in the UK.

 

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9 Comments

  1. Abdullah says:

    MasyaAllah. Such a wonderful story created by this sister. Hopefully, you will continue writing this kind of story as a sign to support those who are being tortured and killed in Syria. Jazakallah khair sister..

  2. Yasmin says:

    Mashahallah, very touvhing and emotional piece. May Allah (swt) have Mercy on all the innocent people that are suffering throughout the world!

    • Mohamed says:

      Nights were so nice in times of peace…

      That is why people cannot sleep when they have no inner peace..

      War is of course mentioned in the poem / article..

      May Allah help the brothers and sisters in Syria. Ameen.

  3. Asma S says:

    This gave me goosebumps! I am in awe, I felt guilt, sadness, hope, fear. So beautifully written Amal. Well done. Syria is always in my prayers, may Allah have mercy on these poor souls and grant them peace in this life and the next. Ameen.

  4. Osama says:

    Excellent article, captures the pain of our brothers.

  5. sakina says:

    Amal this is amazing mashaAllah, Allah has truly given you a gift with words ! May He increase you in eloquence for the service of the deen !

  6. Maryam says:

    MashaAllah… these words you wrote are so powerful and inshaAllah they will be a reminder to all of us to remember that this is a reality for so many of our brothers and sisters. May Allah (swt) send abundant blessings upon you for this!

  7. Amal says:

    Ameen to your duaas, and the same to you all. Jazakumulahu Khairan for your kind comments and support. Keep the people of Syria and all the oppressed in the world in your duaas.

    http://www.homeboundblogger.wordpress.com

  8. sara says:

    Good article MashaAllah!beautifully articulated in words. Allah blessed you greatly with talent to write,because your words are heart touching.

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